Songwriting

I started writing songs at 18.  Believe it when I say I was no prodigy.

My first song was called “I can see through you (like a window)” It was less than stellar.  Elvis Costello was a big influence at the time… and I loved how cynical and intelligent his lyrics were.  I possessed no such skill, yet… but had such a desire to GET good that through mimicking him and other writers, found my own voice, my own signature.

Now I doubt anyone would listen to one of my records and say ‘oh i’ll bet he was an Elvis Costello fan!’.  That’s how copying works.  Bach was a copyist before there were electronics, and would work through the night by candlelight to finish.  It’s no coincidence or sheer genius that he ended up being the greatest composer of all time.  So aware of the works of his day being a copyist, he was able to borrow, avoid and overall learn from the greats before him.

The library is where I started.  Each day i’d walk there and read, keeping a notebook and writing down lines that felt rhythmic or unique in a lyrical way to me.  I still have them in a trunk somewhere, and there are many… filled with lines from Anne Sexton to John Fante, Langston Hughes to Neil Young.  Anything was game as long as it opened up the window of creativity.  So with 46 years of experience, here’s a few tips for new songwriters.

  1. Be agile.  Allow all your walls and floors to move.  Never get so married to an idea that you can’t bend it.  This is the greatest way to end up with little pieces that never see the light of day.
  2.  Don’t try to re-invent the wheel.  In other words, don’t try something chordal or melodic, lyrically or structurally so outside the box, you find yourself outside of the realm of platforms in which to be heard.
  3. Use anything and everything for inspiration.  I used to play a C on the piano with my middle 3 fingers… but quickly learned by changing bass notes on the left hand, a new universe of chords were possible.  Hits are usually made of interesting chords.  Not C-D-G.
  4. Use cheats.  If your brain isn’t feeling too creative, open a book of poetry, other lyrics even, and let the single words and images provide you with some inspiration.  I.e., Bob Dylan from the album ’Street Legal’-
    “I stepped forth from the shadows to the marketplace
    Merchants and thieves, hungry for power
    My last deal gone down
    She’s smelling sweet like the meadows where she was born
    On midsummer’s eve near the tower”
    For me, the words that stand out here are marketplace, merchants, thieves, meadows, tower… but whatever may grab YOU is key.
    “In the marketplace, that’s when I saw your face – On a hot summer night in the city”
    See how I use the word marketplace and borrow ‘midsummer’ and made it ‘hot summer’ instead?
    It’s not rocket science, but when we’re blank for words, this technique can kick-start your thinking.
    Just don’t plagiarize.  Nobody likes that.
  5. Don’t bore us, get to the chorus.  It’s not fun to watch someone look in a mirror, or to listen to an artist with a 1 minute intro.  They’re both masturbatory.  Stop it.  Become a good editor.  If you have a re-intro, make it half as long as the first.  Cut the solo in half.  Try starting the song on the lyric.  Where radio used to love intros so they could do their ID’s up until the vocal starts… nobody’s listening to radio anymore, so get on with the song.
  6. If you’re not a natural hit melody maker, topline writer as they call it now, cowrite!  There’s a reason Robert Fripp is an exceptional musician but not a hit writer.  Melody isn’t his thing.  He’s into notes and difficulty.  Whole ‘nother skillset there.  McCartney is a walking topliner.
  7. Stay away from trite.  Nobody wants to hear “You broke my heart, when you told us we’ll part”.  It’s not 1952.  Don’t do that.  Instead use false rhymes, new words, contemporary themes.  Study people, become a good listener and write down what you hear that grabs you.  You’ll be surprised how creative it gets when you start writing down anything/everything.
  8. Write the song before you start zooming in on the track.  One way to lose sight of a well written song is trying to produce the track too soon.  Get off the DAW and stick with your piano or guitar until the song is realized.  Then, the possibilities are endless on where to put the beats and all the bells & whistles.
  9. Sometimes that thing that makes us feel self-conscious is really our signature trying to find it’s way.  Lean into that.  If you sound like John Mayer or Adele, remember there’s already one of those.  Be brave enough to suck a little.  My bet is something original will start to emerge.
  10. Know there are no rules.  Everything I’ve just stated is not an absolute.  Lennon was a great rule breaker, but he trusted his gut.  We’re not all blessed with the same killer instincts, and Lennon didn’t have as many hits as Max Martin or Dr. Luke… but if you have a unique enough idea that makes you feel something deeply when you sing or play it, then to hell with rules.

19 Comments

  1. Golfercraig511 May 13, 2024 at 9:14 pm

    Thank you for writing this. Recently I picked up a bass guitar and a keyboard in an effort to put some art back in my life. I’ve jotted down a few notes, but writing has been harder than I thought. I will take this advice to heart.

    • Bandini55 May 14, 2024 at 5:45 am

      ❤️

    • Bandini55 May 15, 2024 at 5:39 pm

      I think beginning is the hardest part. It’s like anything else, you don’t know what you don’t know yet. The best way to proceed is to relieve any pressure on yourself and just learn a half dozen new songs you didn’t know how to play. Copying leads to new ideas.

  2. KathrynB May 13, 2024 at 9:37 pm

    Thankyou for this. So often I write down words on anything that comes to hand, paper, phone , napkin. My thinking is ” Oh I’ll finish these songs one day” so toss them aside, when all the while they could be lyrics to the same song coming in at different times…
    At other times I’ll play some nice chords on the keyboard or guitar and think ..”How do I write lyrics so good to match such a great tune”?..Or I thinky issue with myself is, I need to give it time and not get frustrated when the whole thing doesn’t come together straight away.. I’m always thinking coming to songwriting late in life I won’t have the time.
    I appreciate your sharing and will stick some post it notes on my instruments.

    • Bandini55 May 14, 2024 at 5:45 am

      ❤️

    • Bandini55 May 15, 2024 at 5:38 pm

      When I have this problem I reverse the play. I look for a good title and start there. Then write one verse. Let that set the meter before you start any music at all. Sometimes this not only works, but elevates your work.

  3. Angelo Valenti May 13, 2024 at 10:06 pm

    Good advise to all those would be song writers , you may have not been a prodigy , but your hard work and dedication to your craft is second to none , and in my book your a topliner , but I’m heavily biased .

  4. Ricochet5167 May 14, 2024 at 2:29 am

    Love this thread. A topic to explore and endlessly exhaust. So many questions to ask and pick your brain… over a campfire conversation, and a good cigar. Is that the sun coming up? How do I condense and self edit this down to the most important and poignant to ask, to illicit a thought provoking reply? Now that’s a songwriting tip right there… hey? Yes, the cream rises to the top, and talent makes a way for a man… but what if you pour yourself into it, make it a lifelong pursuit, a ring to reach and strive for… but the songs never get validation. You reach down deep and dig from the depths of your soul… give everything you can, absolutely convinced you’ve written a great song… But what’s the sound of one hand clapping? A tree falls in the forest… if nobody hears it. What if you write this wonderful thing and it never grows to become anything. Everyone wants at least 1 song ingrained in the consciousness of America… but without access to the industry, where/how to place or sell a song to be heard, being a total outsider. My songwriting loneliness comes when you put it out there, and a couple friends and family say, oh that’s really good, or nice…. UGH. Struggling to find the balance to continue in a process few really understand the level of work to do it and do it well. Juxtaposed against the literal crap you hear out there, especially on modern country.. or it’s a worldwide smash because it’s a Swifty song.. no matter how vapid and empty or non original/creative some.of those songs songs truly are. That loneliness keeps me from pressing in daily.. striving for great… If it never gains traction and gets heard, even if you write the next greatest song ever written, what good is it if nobody hears it. even so, it’s a compulsion that I can’t stop obsessing over.

    • Bandini55 May 14, 2024 at 5:51 am

      You had me at cigar. As for songs that don’t reach their potential… a lot of people have said nice things about my music. It’s never been earth shatteringly successful, but that’s out of my control. Many have said i’m humble. That’s not actually true when it comes to songwriting. I’d put my music up against anyone’s, and furthermore at this age… I mean, Subliminal Seduction is one of my favorites… and i’m 64. I know there are legends out there, but I don’t hear any Subliminal Seductions coming from any one of them. Sometimes the money and fame take your hunger away. I consider myself blessed to have always kept the hunger! ha. Anyway, write the song and it lives. When it happens to flourish, if ever, is up to the universe.

  5. DrSeve May 14, 2024 at 3:27 am

    Jude, how much for your “Master Class” in song writing. Jude you ARE up there with Dylan. Every song you’ve ever written, I always have to rewind a little, thinking “where did that come from or that was so tasty.” Jude you are the King of turning ears. Putting a sax solo where 99% would put an ’80’s guitar lick.
    Folks, check out “Right There Now”:

    I can still remember
    Driving home in the driving rain
    Past highway signs and Rock Island lines
    California dreamin’
    Oh, I’m right there now

    100% memories. Thanks for sharing them perfectly
    in your your song. Never stop, Jude Cole. You’re next “Open Road” or “Hallowed Ground” is a pencil, paper & candle light away.

    • Bandini55 May 14, 2024 at 5:52 am

      That would be a cool gig actually, having a master class. I don’t know how to do that stuff tho 🙂 ❤️

  6. Chrisla555 May 14, 2024 at 5:20 am

    I must admit, I’ve taken lines from you in addition to many others to get me out of ruts. Not right out using the actual lyrics, but using them as a catapult to move me forward. One of our producers used to use the line, “don’t bore us get to the chorus”. Never forgot that one. Great stuff!

    • Bandini55 May 14, 2024 at 5:53 am

      When Mark Goldenberg played with me he used to say that and I never forgot it. Great line there!

      • musicman May 17, 2024 at 12:10 pm

        I loved the Cretones Thin Red Line album…

  7. loloacoco65@gmail.com May 14, 2024 at 10:33 pm

    This is such a good and interesting article! I’m mot A songwriter but this could be applied to almost anything in life.

  8. Ricochet5167 May 15, 2024 at 1:35 am

    Boy, did I ever make that all about me. I’m so sorry. I had instant regret posting that. Couldnt find an edit or delete button 🙄 Thanks for the reply, the frank and candid insight filled with multiple nuggets, I will no doubt reread again and take to heart. Most of all.. Write it and make it live. I’m going to write that on the wall. Your music inspres and challenges me.. i’ll not forget the advice. Humbly and gratefully, Thank you, Jude.

    • Bandini55 May 15, 2024 at 5:20 pm

      that’s why i’m here 🙂

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